Non-motoring > Communications skills. Miscellaneous
Thread Author: henry k Replies: 6
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 Sat 23 Jul 11 11:33 
 Communications skills. - henry k
The email below is is from a large well known company.
I love the wording and the title at the bottom.

Dear Mr Henry
We are writing to acknowledge receipt of your recent email regarding improvements to our website.
Firstly, may we thank you for your comments, we can confirm that your emails have been forwarded to the relevant department and your comments will be considered when improving our website.
Yours Sincerely
xxxx
Customer Service Correspondence Administrator.



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 Sat 23 Jul 11 12:06 
 Communications skills. - Zero
We used to sell CSCA's, its a nifty piece of software.
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 Sat 23 Jul 11 13:41 
 Communications skills. - Roger.
I would have put, at the very least a semi-colon, but probably a colon, after "comments".
"Firstly" - yes, but where is the "secondly"?
There are no commas after the salutation or the valediction.
Awarded 5/10!
Last edited by: Roger on Sat 23 Jul 11 at 13:41
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 Sat 23 Jul 11 15:16 
 Communications skills. - Robbie34
Sincerely should be lower case.
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 Sat 23 Jul 11 15:17 
 Communications skills. - Robbie34
Why did she/he put kisses at the end?:(
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 Sat 23 Jul 11 17:03 
 Communications skills. - Duncan
henry, why do you let them address you by your given name? I mean, we can, but then we are old friends.

I think at least they should call you Mr k.
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 Sat 23 Jul 11 17:04 
 Communications skills. - R.P.
It's the new job title for Postboy.
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