My suggestions (as someone who has won a few of these sorts of things, including two major ones with banks)...
>> Don't say you won't return as a customer (why whould they then help you)
>> In para 4 you suddenly bring goodridge into the argument without saying why
>> instead I'd say about them changing their mind regarding the refund
>> Sow some doubt and give them a reason to climb down gracefully - goodridge may have made a mistake - "perhaps there are two models of master cylinder fitted to this bike, because these ones certainly did not fit mine"
>> might be worth putting in a call to consumer direct (trading standards) before sending, and then mention their advice?
>> The last para is a bit woffly - I'd cut out the ebay stuff and state the resolution you want - a full and immediate refund.
Did you pay by credit card - if so, get them to reverse the transaction; works very well in my experience. Barclaycard are partcilarly helpful.
Last edited by: Tigger on Wed 15 Sep 10 at 06:24
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